Reading/Writing Level 2
Instructor: Danae Martinez
Spring I 2014
Surgery
The following sentences had complications and need surgery to recover. Choose two sentences and think about what is wrong with them. Then discuss how to correct them. Post the corrected sentences on the blog as comments.
- The name meaning “New Home.”
- Marmaris located in Turkey.
- Marmaris is a enjoyable places.
- Symbol the car easy to drive and reliable.
- The Modayol brought products in the fashion. It was put in own website.
- It is cames of origin English and German.
- Moreover, Lay’s is canvinience to bring to and it can share to everybody because it has a lot of size.
- The name Ahmed is from Arabic, and the origin of the world Ahmed also from Arabic.
7 comments:
2.Marmaris is located in Turkey.
7.Moreover, Lay’s is convenience to bring to and it can share to everybody because it has a lot of size.
1) The name means "New Nome."
2) The Modayol brought products in fashion . It upload on their website.
1 - Symbol car drives easy and reliable.
Symbol cars are easy to drive and reliable.
2 - The origin of the world Ahmed 's name is from Arabic.
The origin name 's Ahmed of the world from Arabic.
The name Ahmed comes from Arabic.
5. Modayol creates fashionable products. It uploads pictures of their products on their website.
7.Moreover, Lay’s is convenient to take and we can share with everybody because it has a lot of sizes.
8. The name Ahmed comes from Arabic, and the origin of the word Ahmed is also from Arabic.
4. Symbol cars are easy to drive and rediable
8.The name Ahmed comes from Arabic,and the origin of the word Ahmed is also from Arabic
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