In my family
there is my mother, my father, my sister and
me. Subject-Verb
Agreement (there is or there are)
In my family
there are my mother, my father, my sister
and me. OK
There are
four people in my family: my mother, my father, my sister and myself. BETTER
My family is
very big, had nine peoples. Plural/Singular error OR Count and Noncount nouns. People
not peoples. Had would be better as has.
Wrong Word Choice.
My family is
very big. We are nine people.
She bore two
lovely daughters. Best: She has two lovely daughters.
My father named Joseph. My father is named Joseph. Missing
Verb error. Check all your sentences to make sure they have a VERB.
My parents
work at father’s own
restaurant. My parents work at my father’s restaurant.
Her dream is
own fashion shop by herself. Her dream is to
have her own fashion shop. To+infinitive
My mother
made breakfast every day and she said “I can’t give you any money or a gift but
I will take care your healthy.” … of your health OR: I can make you healthy
food.
My second
brother he’s name Mohammed, he is 28 years
old he’s married in
2008, and he has two children one boy and girl their names are Omar and Saga, so I am -- aunt to two beautiful children.
He is retired next year. He will retire next year. Check your VERB TENSE.
