Are these sentences good Topic Sentences? Do they tell you what the subject of the paragraph will be? Do they have general information or specific examples (they shouldn't have examples)?
:) In my free time I have different hobbies here than in my country, Venezuela.
2. I like to play basketball. :(
:) I like sports as a hobby.
Concluding Sentences should LOOK DIFFERENT from the Topic Sentence but say the SAME thing.
1. As you can see, the things I love to do in Venezuela are much more interesting than what I do here.
2. Finally, my favorite pastime always involves sports.
1. In my free time in Venezuela I play the drum set, and the computer but here I do not have drum set or a good computer. :(
:) In my free time I have different hobbies here than in my country, Venezuela.
2. I like to play basketball. :(
:) I like sports as a hobby.
Concluding Sentences should LOOK DIFFERENT from the Topic Sentence but say the SAME thing.
1. As you can see, the things I love to do in Venezuela are much more interesting than what I do here.
2. Finally, my favorite pastime always involves sports.
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